基礎ENGL-WRIARG-022
A paragraph starts with a reason about cost, then gives an example about friendship, then ends with a sentence about climate. What should you fix first?
A. Add more unrelated topics so the paragraph looks longer.
B. Keep one controlling idea and move unrelated examples to other paragraphs or cut them.✓ 答案
C. Remove the topic sentence and hope the reader finds a theme.
D. Repeat the word important in every sentence.
解說
一段一個中心。成本、友情、氣候如果沒有明確關係，讀者睇唔到發展。加長、刪主題句、重複 important 都唔解決統一性。